There wasn't that much voice in the blog (even though it was still pretty lively and interesting to read). That's probably what I would say would need to be improved on and a couple words were misspelled...but overall it's GREAT!
There wasn't that much voice in the blog (even though it was still pretty lively and interesting to read). That's probably what I would say would need to be improved on and a couple words were misspelled...but overall it's GREAT!
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